pecha kucha

link to my pecha kucha presentation:

http://issuu.com/astridweguelin/docs/pecha_kucha

I wasn't too pleased with how I presented my pecha kucha, because I don't think I was entirely sure of where I wanted to go with this project; it all came out a bit confused and jumbled. 
feedback I got:
- show through drawings why I think they are important
- done a lot of visual and contextual research
- try and incorporate feelings of the people during the revolution within the buildings
- create own utopia
- like use of collage
- needs more of a concept behind the structures
- collage in the revolution with the buildings
- depict utopian buildings using colour to set them apart from rest of world
- do 3D pieces
- look into the Bauhaus
- good use of colour
- use angles to communicate intimidation
- extending the buildings with lines works well
- would benefit from more practical interrogation 
- what are you trying to say

I feel some of the feedback I got was helpful, but some didn't really relate to what I want to do with this project; but I think that is down to how I presented it. It was just full of multiple initial ideas that havent really gone anywhere.

I think I need to do some more research - visual and contextual, to get more of an idea of what I want to communicate.