Crit to help us finalise our ideas, clear up any issues we have with our work.
my feedback:
- clear that my work is portraying russian architecture during the time of political change into communism. Sketchbook work communicates this well
- work has a sense of intimidating structures
- lots of media processes, conveys a sense of what Russia was like at the time
- I have enhanced feeling of power, intimidation through my work
- should keep using the collage work and lines, but on a bigger scale
- media is very appropriate for subject matter
- keep experimenting in this style, scale up work
Useful feedback, I think I am pretty clear on where I want to go and seem to have shown that in my work as I have been told to keep doing what I'm doing.
I haven't come across any problems yet, but I think I would benefit with some more play with the compositions and with how I should make my buildings statement architecture.
It was also suggested that I try out screen printings, which I hadn't thought of with these designs. But that method would actually work really well I think, as I am aiming for bold pieces.
I am not too confident with screen printing, having only attempted it once, but I feel it is worth doing some test pieces to see how my drawings will work scree printed.
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