I made some changes which have pulled it together more I think
- added the off white background which works a lot better than the grey or white; allows the imagery to be the main focus without having too much of a contrast
- changed the hand drawn smoke to flat texture which is a lot less distracting
- unsure about the flags because the blue ruins the limited colour palette, so might have to alter it slightly; make it less bright
- I think the barbed wire works really well to create the 'ww1' atmosphere
- need to start working on text haven't really left much space to fit it in
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