Thursday, 23 April 2015

finalising

I talked to Eleanor about my images and she thought my front page could do with some changes, at the moment its this:


She thought that with what I'm trying to show (the city as something quite oppressive which manipulates our behaviour, a bleak scene) it would be better to enlarge the buildings and get rid of the white space to make it seem more overwhelming and oppressive. 

So I went back and made it into this:


I was thinking about getting rid of all the white space, but I think the small gaps make it seem more claustrophobic, as if you're looking for a way out. 

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