We had a peer review of our initial concepts, we were put into groups and we would fill out a proposal form for someone else from just looking at their sketchbook. Here are the answers from two people looking at my work:
1. What research needs to be undertaken into the general and specific contexts of the research project?
Brief history of architecture (bauhaus, art deco)
Where is this project specific to?
WW1 - demolished buildings, what impact did the destroyed architecture have on people (families, workers etc)
Architecture as art - as it can provoke an emotional response from people like art often does
Places/locations with a strong atmosphere - empty/derelict/busy/vibrant (slums, flats, churches, cathedrals, seven wonders of the world)
What places/ people are most strongly affected by their environment? (places where there is 24 hour sunlight)
Look at Malaysia (apparently the buildings there are incredible but soulless, why?)
Does mass production mean that our buildings in UK are less emotive?
2. What approaches could be taken and what processes, methods, materials and tools could be involved in the research project?
Historical/sociological/semiotic methodological approach?
Think about how to create an atmosphere/emotion, and whether to convey one specific atmosphere or a variety
Dramatic images? Architecture at night-time?
Document various buildings from periods of history and record how they make you feel - reflective practise, could juts have one sketchbook full of notes?
Does the gender of the architect make a difference to the emotion given off?
3. What preparation or investigations needs to be undertaken for the research project to take place?
Technical processes
Could research into emotive architects/spacial designers and their life to see if this influences their work/designs
4. What research needs to be undertaken regarding who the project is for?
Try to find out how people feel in certain buildings/places
Interiors or exteriors?
Could be fore an architecture magazine, but figure out methodology first and then go from there.
I got some useful feedback about where I could take this. I need to go out to take photos and do observational drawings in some of the places suggested and find a way to communicate atmosphere while also gathering contextual research for the essay. I am going to do a revised proposal when I have done more research and have a better understanding of where to take this.





